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I'll let the blood run and flow
I'll watch the scars grow and grow
I know inside I'll never be free
And that this life is made for me

I'll hide the blades and knives and scars
I'll please everyone and be happy for a while

But when will they realise?
When will they know?
I want to die,
I want to be gone.
A poem I wrote today just before my therapy. This is also a drawing which I will upload in a minute

Lani, ASuicidalPoet xo
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the-stephy-powers Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When I was the most depressed, I drew or wrote poetry. The second my mood would switch to happy again, I'd throw the stuff away. I almost wish I had kept the stuff so I could see me at my lowest points.
I do remember writing a story with a friend and writing over and over again 'I don't want to be here', 'I don't want to go home' or 'I want to be somewhere else'. I was just very unhappy with life. I remember more than I should really. I keep saying one of these days I'll write a book, but I'd have to put it under a pen name. I don't want people to look at me and know my past. I've suffered, but everyone does.
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FlyingHeartist Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Drawing and writing are amazing ways to release some of that pent up sadness that always comes with depression. Try to keep your art (both drawings and poetry) for as long as you can. I have folders that I put mine it, maybe that would be a good idea for you. Sometimes our most beautiful pieces are made when we are depressed. Please try remember that it can always get better.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
When I'm at my lowest, I write poetry... then post it on here :) xx
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Chiseikumo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
I read this text
and think
that I´ve wrote these lines
because they match perfectly to me.

It's an incredible text, I like it.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
thank you so much :) xx
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Chiseikumo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
you´re welcom
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
:')
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qwibes Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013   Writer
Damn, that is one powerful poem :')
The rhyme works very well :)
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
thank, I generally don't use rhyme, but I decided that it would work well in this instance xx
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qwibes Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013   Writer
It sure did!
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