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Someday I'll be cured,
I'll shed my skin
Be new.

Someday I'll be found,
I'll stop being lost
And live.

Someday I'll be free,
Show off my arms
Scars faded.

Someday I'll be known,
For my troubling fight
For freedom.

           Someday...

Today I'm in pain,
The wish to harm
beats hope.

But,
Someday I'll be cured,
I'll shed my skin
Be new.
Poem 1/5 that I may be entering into the Poetry Screams Competition

Tell me what you think! The top three will be submitted

Lani, ASuicidalPoet xo
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ShelrenWolf Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love how you created something that speaks to so many. It gives people hope and not just in the sense of cutting, but even in the sense of people whose dreams never came true etc.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
thank you, that is exactly what I was trying to achieve :)
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ShelrenWolf Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Goal achieved ^^ pleasure! Looking forward to some more poems from you.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Thanks muchly :)
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Thanks once again for your entry and good luck!
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Thank you kindly x
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AnoymousGhost Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
this was lovely :) being in a difficult situation right now and having scars i'm very self-conscious about its very comforting to see someone who knows how i feel. i often try to think optimistically, and this is a great perspective!
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
thank you muchly x
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AnoymousGhost Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
you're very welcome :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
That's it. Never lose hope :hug:
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