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Someday I'll be cured,
I'll shed my skin
Be new.

Someday I'll be found,
I'll stop being lost
And live.

Someday I'll be free,
Show off my arms
Scars faded.

Someday I'll be known,
For my troubling fight
For freedom.

           Someday...

Today I'm in pain,
The wish to harm
beats hope.

But,
Someday I'll be cured,
I'll shed my skin
Be new.
Poem 1/5 that I may be entering into the Poetry Screams Competition

Tell me what you think! The top three will be submitted

Lani, ASuicidalPoet xo
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ShelrenWolf Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love how you created something that speaks to so many. It gives people hope and not just in the sense of cutting, but even in the sense of people whose dreams never came true etc.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Oct 27, 2013  Student Writer
thank you, that is exactly what I was trying to achieve :)
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ShelrenWolf Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Goal achieved ^^ pleasure! Looking forward to some more poems from you.
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Oct 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks muchly :)
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dreamsinstatic Oct 13, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks once again for your entry and good luck!
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you kindly x
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:iconanoymousghost:
this was lovely :) being in a difficult situation right now and having scars i'm very self-conscious about its very comforting to see someone who knows how i feel. i often try to think optimistically, and this is a great perspective!
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AOnceSuicidalPoet Oct 11, 2013  Student Writer
thank you muchly x
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:iconanoymousghost:
you're very welcome :)
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:iconkillerlord123:
That's it. Never lose hope :hug:
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