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I'd like to propose a cheer,
To those who ever put me down
Gave up on me,
Called me a failure.
You haven't seen the best of me yet.
You watch me, I see
As I walk, fear free
Ready
Ready to prove you wrong.
I feared failure
Because you told me it was going to happen
But now I rejoice,
Because someone
believes in me.
So I will walk into that exam hall,
And smile at you.
Because you judged me
But can't you see?
You haven't seen the best of me yet.
Literature
Just For A Second
Please can you imagine for me
just for a second...
Imagine me
With you
Both of us...
Happy.
That's all I dream about
I don't have the imagination
To think of the specifics
Like how it would happen
What we'd be like together
Why we'd be happy
But when I let myself dream
I imagine us...
And while I know
You don't dream about me
You don't know me
Or whether I can truly
Make you happy...
I want you to imagine that
Just for a second,
And tell me if I can try
To make it real.
Literature
Take It All Away.
There’s a tear between each smile and a fracture on my heart
And a thousand feelings breaking me and tearing me apart
Knowing when it’s over I may lose my sanity
Embrace the mess I am and the storm inside of me
In the dark I have a chance to fight away my problems
To ignore them all away instead of trying to solve them
All I saw when I looked back was a mass of insecurity
Laying waste to who I am and ripping at the seam
Lowering my already non-existent self-esteem
And I couldn’t help admitting I’m a self-made failure
Walking a broken path as a second-hand savior
And it all adds up to nothing; me in a nutshell
Yankin
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Take the Pain Away
My heart longs for you, O Father.
I long to feel Thy warm embrace.
Wrap Your arms around me.
Comfort my wounded soul.
Wipe my tears away.
Tell me, "Everything will be alright".
Please, come back to me.
Come back to me and make the pain go away.
Do not leave me alone any longer.
Do not let me suffer any more.
I want you.
I need You.
Come back, father.
Come back.
Heal my wounded soul.
Mend my broken heart.
Fill me with Thy love.
Take the pain away.
For i cannot bear it much longer.
The hurt cuts too deep.
The tears submerge me in sorrow.
The anguish eats at my soul.
All joy seems to fade away . . .
as i realize i'm alone.
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I was inspired by the song "This is Gospel" by Panic! At the Disco, and stole the line "You haven't seen the best of [me] yet"
I walked out of the exam today knowing I'd done myself proud.
I'm going to prove the critics wrong,
I'm not a failure.
~Alanna
I walked out of the exam today knowing I'd done myself proud.
I'm going to prove the critics wrong,
I'm not a failure.
~Alanna
© 2014 - 2024 AOnceSuicidalPoet
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I can read the flow and love the emotions in this one. The feeling of someone doubting your abilities, your strength and your will to get to the top. With an entity of doubt which presses you down. You say in the end you'll prove your better then what they think. Someone believes you- which brings hope into this poem. And with even that little help, it'll bring you to the top, one person can change your out look on life.